Luke’s: Feedback
- Remove the pirouette and replace with a close up of the face. “like a sissy girl.”
- Face poses – Get them in there early. Dead pan expressions to make it serious.
- Avoid the step forward. Best to keep it in the same place.
I didn’t have too much to change which is good, I think I will just cut out those parts and replace with the close ups. Hopefully, won’t take me too long. I like this idea and think i wont get totally bored with it. I still need to think of which rig I want to use. I initially wanted to use stitch but this rig is a better fit for my performance animation. I need a rig with great facial controls to help me succeed in the close ups. I don’t have much experience in facial movement so will need to research and use examples online. I don’t know how to do the eyebrow movement but have definitely seen it in a Pixar film somewhere.
I didn’t know how to do the Mexican wave with my eyebrows so I cut a clip from a youtube video of a Mexican wave tutorial. I want to use this when the camera does a close up on the face the first time saying “Like a sissy girl.”
Here is my edited version where I have cut out parts of the first reference to add in the close ups of the face talking very eccentrically and serious. I have uploaded to ftrack to get feedback.